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My first fanfic in eng. (orz)
Give me comments plz =v=
(originally written in chinese as a valentine's present(?) for Len -v-)

Hino Kahoko, never a girl who is keen on cooking. Making cakes or something similar is definitely not her strength. However, today, she prepared bars of chocolate for her loved one.

Len Tsukimori, never a guy who knows romance. His calm is as cold as ice that everyone knows it. However, he placed red rose in his violin box cautiously today, and taken his treasured violin out from the box. Although today he will be unable to practise violin at school, for that girl, he thinks, it worth.

' Len, let's go to the roof for lunch. Kahoko. '
Carefully typed these words and pressed the button "send", Kahoko was relieved. ' Hope that Len will like my chocolate. Oh, he seems that he doesn't like the taste of sweet, what a pity...... '

' Len, let's go to the roof for lunch. Kahoko. '
Recieved the message, Len shown a smile he didn't know but quite noticeable for the others. ' I must give the roses out at lunch, Kaho will love them.'

Have I ever said that? Today, is Valentine's.

As if replying to the couple's expectation, lunch came at last.

After the bell rang, Kahoko dash out from the classroom at once towards the music section building, not noticing that the teacher still had something to speak.

' Yu, Yunoki? ' Halfway to the roof, Kahoko met Yunoki. She was so shocked because of the countless chocolate and roses meaning "passionated love", "I only love you", "permanent love", etc. holding by Yunoki.

What Kahoko couldn't see behind this image is, although it wasn't a pleasure to hold such a lot of things, Yunoki pretended that he met Kahoko just by "accident".

' Are you feeling discontented seeing me? ' Asked Yunoki.
' Of course NOT! ' Kanoko disclaimed immediately, and continued, ' I have something extremely important to do, goodbye Yunoki. '

Just as Kahoko was leaving, Yunoki said, ' Can't wait to see Tsukimori ? ' With a gentle smile hanging on his face.

Kahoko's face couldn't help turning red liked her shining hair, ' What I need to do is really none of your business, don't you agree? '

Kahoko regreted after the words came out from her mouth.
' Of course it DOESN'T matter. ' I believed everyone knew that "doesn't" meant "does" in this sentence. ' Don't you need to help when someone is holding lots of things such as I ? ' Still, smiling.
' That's the reason why he holds these things, just to get me into trouble......' Kahoko swallowed these words and replied, ' How dare I would be if I don't help you. ' Kahoko gave a warming smile to her fellow schoolmate. ' What a pity for Len to wait... ', thought Kahoko. ' Have I said that I have something important to do? Let's be quick. '

' I hate Yunoki !' Kahoko's eyes were on fire. ' To settle those stupid chocolates and roses, spent me more than 20 minutes! And I had to bear those girls jealous gaze! ' Kahoko ran quickly towards the roof with murmurs about Yunoki. ' I must be in the roof in a minute, Len must be waiting unpatiently! '

Tsukimori is extraordinary today.
We said he is extraordinary because, Tsukimori is a good-mannered boy. Usually, when some teachers can only give pointless remarks, he would show respect to those teachers and tries to catch some meaningful phrases during the teachers are speaking. However, Tsukimori stopped the tutor from talking after the bell had rung. Ignored the broken-hearted teacher, Tsukimori rushed for the roof.

'......'
Now, there are 3 persons on the roof. That means, besides Tsukimori, there are 2 others who shall not appear at this moment and this venue.
'......'
' Hey Tsukimori, you look cross. Haven't you said that we can come to the roof? '
' You don't look good when you are angry. '
On that wonderfully good-looking face that can even anger girls with envy, appeares a big sign of cross.

Actually, when Tsukimori wanted to climb the stairs towards the roof, Hihara jumbed to the front of Tsukimori and asked, ' Tsukimori, are you going to the roof for practising? Let's together! ' (Please remember that Tsukimori had taken out the violin from the box and put roses instead.)
Just as Tsukimori trying to refuse, Tsuchiura showed up.
' Hi Hihara and Tsukimori. Are you guys going up? '
' Yes! Let's go. ' Hihara replied. Without seeing the discontent under Tsukimori's eyes.

' Um... I... ' No sooner had Tsukimori started his sentence, Tsuchiura spoke at once, ' Seems that Mr. Tsukimori doesn't welcome us. Hihara, let's go to the practising room... '
' No. ' Tsukimori stopped Tsuchiura from speaking and said, ' I have no discontent at all. ' The words made Tsukimori repent after they were said. Smart as Tsukimori had never thought that his contradictory psychology to Tsuchiura was being used.
' Let's go then. ' Tsuchiura announced.

Complained Yunoki, Kahoko got her "reward". She needed to stop again. For the 1st grades she was meeting now -- Shimizu and Fuyuumi.
' Where are you racing to, Kahoko? ' Fuyuumi, always looks lovely, looks evil today.
' Are you going to the roof, Kahoko? ' Shimizu, always feels sleepy, wide awake today. Kahoko was down although she should be happy about Shimizu's wakefulness.

' Sorry, Kahoko(Len), there's too much today! '
Standing at different places, the couple said with the same exclamations.

The door knob was turned, however, coming in wasn't Kahoko.

' Oh, everybody's here? ' The one who was now speaking, was Kaji Aoi, only transferred to Seiso very recently. ' Yunoki isn't here. ' A smile ran over Kaji's face quickly. ' Oh my goodness! ' Suddenly Kaji shouted. In front of the door, Kaji was hurt, by the unexpectedly opened door.
' Sorry, Kaji. I didn't notice you were behind...... ' The one opened the door was Yunoki, just mentioned by Kaji. The meaning of these words was, Kaji was unimportant to Yunoki, he had no value to stay in Yunoki's eyes.
The air over these two guys was strange, it seemed that something was likely to happen very soon.
At the same time, the atmosphere surrounding Tsukimori was horrifying too, a kind of explosion, like volcanic eruption, would soon occur.

The door knob was turned again, this time was Kahoko, with 2 other persons.

Kahoko didn't want to know why the handsome guys of Seiso were now all here at the roof without any promise. The only thing she valued was to have a sweet Valentine's with her loving boyfriend.

Watched by the others, the couple could do nothing close. Kahoko shocked her head gently feeling impotent. Suddenly, Kahoko came up with a mind, ' Why don't me give them the chocolates? They will look downwards they eat those chocolates.'

' Hey guys, I've made some "friendly" chocolates, would you mind accepting these? '

Cold wind blew ----
The word "friendly" must have been one in the eyes for the boys.

Kahoko didn't know why no one replied to her, she said, ' The chocolates I made you don't want to eat...? '
Hihara couldn't bear the big eyes shining with innocence of Kahoko. Tears rounding, Hihara was the first to accept the chocolate. ' Excellent taste! Thanks, Kahoko. ' Although he tasted bitter, although what he really wanted was chocolate with love instead of friendship, Hihara spoke.
Other boys started to accept the reality after the reaction of Hihara. Eating their own pieces of chocolate without a word.

While the others were lowering their heads to eat the chocolates, Kahoko lifted her head, gave her chocolate, that had been hidden in her mouth, to Len by kiss.

Despite the reality that there were too much people disrupting, although Kahoko could only give her Valentine's present secretly and silently; the distance between the hearts of the couple, could never be so short and close.

Pretending not to see what was happening, the guys thought, ' Would god blessing upon this couple. '
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