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| Posted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 4:23 am Post subject: 2/14/07 - Love IS Blind |
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For those who cannot read it, the center panel says: Okay, Jare, get a hold of yourself. You only have one chance to make [a] first impression, so you must get it right.”
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 12:32 am Post subject: |
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The sad thing is, you can draw better than me. |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:51 am Post subject: |
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I think my plot (which has hardly been developed yet) will be good enough to make up for any deficiencies you may find.
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 1:56 pm Post subject: |
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no offence, but i doubt that highly. |
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 7:56 pm Post subject: |
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Wait a second, guest posting should be disabled in this forum.
*goes to investigate*
EDIT: Done.
Also, what do you suggest I do, then? Give up and go home?
{Joat, you already are home.}
You get the point. Seriously, I am not giving up on this. As yet, you are the only one who has expressed any dislike of the comic (I showed this to other people off the internet) and I am more stubborn than you may think.
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| Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 10:40 pm Post subject: |
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I never said you should give up, I said that you should try to better yourself artwise.
I understand that it's impossible to go from crap to great overnight, but the art seriously needs improvement.
Or at least clean it up a bit.
Just constructive criticism. |
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