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Kyalesyin
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| Posted: Fri Sep 01, 2006 10:04 pm Post subject: Homelands discussion thread |
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Well, I think this fic is awesome, but I would. I helped write it!
So, what do you think. Discuss. Debate. Bicker. Quibble. If you got a favourite line, talk about it. The bug needs feeeeeeeeedback!
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Avarice
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I've only finished Chapter 3 (because about half way through, at roughtly 7:20ish, it dawned on me how much nothing I've ate today), so I'll comment on #3, and get back to you on 4.
You must know that if you keep this story up too much longer I'm going to have to start inventing adjectives of greateosity.
I love Remy's 'camo'. It was pure brilliance to use that and the "*Sign language*". And the team is working together amazingly. These four would make for an unbelieveable on-going series.
And you just keep dropping new surprises on us. I can't wait to see what Pops and Creed (no not the band) are doing there.
I could probably go read Chapter 4 right now, but every time I read one of your chapters I get the itch to write something. Feel free to take that as an EXTREME compliment.
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Stefbug
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:20 am Post subject: |
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 Thank you, I'm seriously blushing now.
And I am planning to do this as an ongoing series (with two more arcs) but first I've got to finish a sequal to one of my other stories, that I've been working on and off on since february.
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Kyalesyin
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:28 am Post subject: |
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Glad you liked the "*sign language*"! We weren't sure if it was gonna be workable.
What did you think of the bouncing on the bed scene by the way?
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Avarice
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| Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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I laughed pretty hard at that one. I love when an author can take a serious scene, infuse it with riot inspiring humor, and not cheapen the story's atmosphere.
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Woah. Now thats a compliment. We weren't totaly sure that scene- and a few off the other funny/serious scenes were gonna work out.
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As far as I'm concerned your humor flowed very natural within the situations.
I just finished reading Chapter 4. A great ending to an incredible arc.
Speaking of humor, I loved the Logan clawing at the door scene. And of course the case of mistaken LeBeau identity.
To be honest, I was somewhat lookin forward to a big brawl between Logan, Laura, Creed and random victoms, but after reading I understand you put your focus somewhere else during the fight. That was rather inventive.
With the current collection of players and state of events, I cannot wait to see where the next arc takes us.
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