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Avarice Council Member User is Offline

Joined: 01 Sep 2006 Posts: 500
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| Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:18 am Post subject: The Void Discussion |
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A place to discuss The Void. As always any and all comments (provided they are related to said story) are welcomed, and if anyone wants to say something out of the public eye, please feel free to PM me.
Hope you enjoy. _________________ I am Loki Scar-Lip, Loki Skywalker, Loki Giant's Child, Loki Lie-Smith.
I am Loki who is fire and wit and hate.
I am Loki. And I will be under an obligation to no one. |
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Syaoran Master Thief User is Offline

Joined: 01 Sep 2006 Posts: 546
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| Posted: Mon Nov 20, 2006 4:28 am Post subject: |
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That was good beginning, Ave. You've got me really curious as to who is watching the monitor. You definitely got a loyal reader through this fic. |
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Stefbug Matriarch of the Guild User is Offline

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Location: Plymouth
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AAAAAAAAVVVVVVVVVVVV!!!!!!!!!!
Ok, now that I have expressed my joy at you posting a new story I shall review it.
Wow, just plain wow. You've managed an apocolypse, the destruction of the mansion, Remy going back to normal (because of a very good doctor ) and tying in the story line that was left open in the comics all in one chapter. You are an amazing writer and I will be looking forward to the rest of this story with baited breath.
I think I know who was watching the monitor and it will be interesting to see how Remy pays off his debts this time. It was also nice to see a slightly harder Remy, and have him admit to making a mistake.
I want the next chapter already, but I guess I am going to have to be patient. After all, you can't rush genius. _________________ And I sit, endlessly watching the people as they walk below me, knowing that I will never walk among them, knowing I will never live as they have lived and loving them for it.
Bang mon ami, you dead!
God loves Tante, he's too scared to do otherwise. |
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Serenity Thief User is Offline

Joined: 02 Sep 2006 Posts: 144
Location: London (ish),UK
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| Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 4:48 pm Post subject: |
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oooh! so is he good/bad....tricksy little thief, loving it Ave, bring it on  |
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Syaoran Master Thief User is Offline

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| Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:48 am Post subject: |
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Another excellent chapter Avarice. |
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Stefbug Matriarch of the Guild User is Offline

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| Posted: Mon Nov 27, 2006 8:44 am Post subject: |
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That has to be the funniest thing I've read for a while. It almost had me snorting my banana milk all over the computer.
Great chapter Av. I love the slow build you've got going, where little by little the world that you are using as your stage is being revealed and explained to us.
Its also interesting to see how some of our fave characters are faring in this new world order.
Psylocke's rant almost had me falling off the seat it was so funny, and the best thing is that it is accurate.
Once again I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. _________________ And I sit, endlessly watching the people as they walk below me, knowing that I will never walk among them, knowing I will never live as they have lived and loving them for it.
Bang mon ami, you dead!
God loves Tante, he's too scared to do otherwise. |
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| Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 3:09 pm Post subject: |
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I'm intrigued, so many unknowns! It's great Avarice, I was worrying you'd given up when the posts went all kaplooey for a bit! Am waiting with baited breath... |
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Stefbug Matriarch of the Guild User is Offline

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Good gods but you've pulled some plot twists with this one, some damn good plot twists.
I'm sorry that I've only just had a chance to catch up on what you've posted. I wish I'd caught up sooner, because oh boy is this incredible.
I can't wait for the next part, because I *need* to know what is happening.
Bravo, Av, bravo. _________________ And I sit, endlessly watching the people as they walk below me, knowing that I will never walk among them, knowing I will never live as they have lived and loving them for it.
Bang mon ami, you dead!
God loves Tante, he's too scared to do otherwise. |
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