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DianaDCC
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| Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:40 pm Post subject: The Painted Picture |
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The Painted Picture
A frame of dark oak surrounds
-----A pale white canvas.
Little red specks of pain
-----Spiral around a vivid red pool.
Red tears of sorrow
-----Run from the pool leaving
----------A trail to mark their path.
A blue mist hangs over the painting
-----As saddened fans look on
----------With flushed, tear stained cheeks.
A black and bleak darkness
-----Shrouds the painting
----------And the red comes to life.
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Morpheus
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| Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 3:23 am Post subject: |
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Little red specks of pain
-----Spiral around a vivid red pool. |
"Pain" works nicely in this context, it's so close to "paint!"
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| Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:11 pm Post subject: |
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I LOVED THIS, Diana!!!!!
The beginning - the white canvas reminds me of a face. Vivid red pool reminds me the heart, while the red specks are spatter from it (as it hurts). The tears of sorrow running from the pool leaving it's trail - first thought in my mind was the heart bleeding out and running along the floor. The blue mist - tears of loved ones. Black and bleak - we all know to be death and the red coming to life because it's was the life force.
Ah who knows! I enjoyed this in MY mind though. 
:-*
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DianaDCC
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| Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 7:47 pm Post subject: |
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Glad you guys liked it. I wrote it just on impulse. |
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