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hug therapy
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| Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 10:43 am Post subject: The Faces |
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"The Faces"
A nation dies
A person hopes
A child cries
A widow copes
A baby is born
A woman laughs
An old one mourns
A husband sighs
These I see
The faces
In the mirror.
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DianaDCC
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| Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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wow I like this it holds so many meanings for those like us. thanks for sharing it. |
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Liquid*Muse
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| Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome piece here Hugs. I was always partial to the shorter writings anyways. They can say so much in a few meaningful words. I think you've pretty much summed up life in itself. Nice!
:-*
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Morpheus
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| Posted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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I agree with Liquid, shorter poems tend to pack a concentrated punch!
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