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kyro08
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 3:45 am Post subject: Untitled |
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I know it has been some time since we have lost Amanda but this poem recently just popped in my head so i dont really know what to say about reading it as im sure it will rustle some memories. But for those who want to read it here it is.
The plain sheets drenched in that uncomfortable smell
Rustled with the dying movement of an angel.
The tears were helpless and the pain insufferable.
The nurses scattered and the doctors rushed
As the angel inaudibly cried for help.
The Mothers tears were helpless and her pain insufferable.
The machines panicked and the noises an omen
Of the shaded future that would alter lives for the worse.
The doctors tears were helpless and their pain insufferable.
The chaos surfaced and the hospital grew dark
As the angel lost her life, her inner beauty, and her shine.
The silence shed tears and the silence created pain.
Beyond the doors the mother sat on the cold concrete
With her legs scrunched up and her head hidden.
It was the first time she wasn’t a mother, she cried and she hurt.
She sat there helpless as the rain punished her body drop after drop
But the world meant nothing without that angel that meant the world.
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 7:42 am Post subject: |
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Kyro, you are an extremely talented writer. AWESOME!!
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 8:54 am Post subject: |
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Oh wow Kyro...
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 9:00 am Post subject: |
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aaawww kyro - see it came back...... I KNEW you still had it in you!  This was very moving 
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 10:59 am Post subject: |
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wow. that is amazing =]
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| Posted: July 1, 2008, 11:05 am Post subject: |
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Wow that great KY-ROW 
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Wow! That was moving.
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| Posted: July 2, 2008, 10:25 am Post subject: Re: Untitled |
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[quote="kyro08"]I know it has been some time since we have lost Amanda but this poem recently just popped in my head so i dont really know what to say about reading it as im sure it will rustle some memories. But for those who want to read it here it is.
I miss her so much  was not sure when i read this part Kyro that I could read this but you are so such a sweet guy with a true talent that i needed too!
Its beautiful and very touching Kyro! I did  Thankyou for sharing your talent with us ,its OK to get a block every now and again its just your mind channeling in a new direction ! you'll be fine!
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That poem is very touching Kyro!
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